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                              《雪》的七種寫法

                              2012-1-5 17:35:50 來源:本站原創 【 】 點擊: 次         ★★★

                              《雪》是魯迅的一首散文詩,對文章主旨的理解是教學的重點和難點。撇開這些,單就文章寫作方面的特色,也值得我們思考和借鑒!

                              第一       全文分為兩部分。

                              二者之間是并列的關系,可是作者卻用了“但是”一詞來過渡。“但是”是表轉折關系的關聯詞語,重點在“但是”的分句。由此可知,作者雖然對江南雪景描繪不少,但朔方的雪才是重點,是作者情感的寄托。

                              第二、       調動各種感官來寫。

                              從視覺寫南方雪景的艷麗。“雪野中有血紅的寶珠山茶,白中隱青的單瓣梅花,深黃的磬口的臘梅花;雪下面還有冷綠的雜草”,“血紅”“隱青”“深黃”“冷綠”色彩艷麗,展現了江南雪野的美艷之至,給讀者以美的視覺感受,同時也為雪野增添了生機和活力。

                              從聽覺寫江南雪景的聲音。“有許多的蜜蜂們忙碌地飛著,也聽得他們嗡嗡的鬧著”,“鬧”字不但有聲音,而且有豐富的畫面感,立體感很強!

                              第三        運用多種修辭手法來寫。

                              比喻。“那是還在隱約著的青春的消息,是極壯健的處子的皮膚”,用“極壯健的處子的皮膚”來比喻雪,寫出了江南的雪白皙、柔嫩、健康的特點,意境新美。

                              排比。“是的,那是孤獨的雪,是死掉的雨,是雨的精魂,”在排比中突出了朔方的雪孤獨,卻昂揚向上,奮斗不息的精神!

                              第四        在實寫中穿插虛寫。

                              “但我的眼前仿佛看見冬花開在雪野中,有許多蜜蜂們忙碌地飛著,也聽得他們呢嗡嗡地鬧著”,作者運用聯想和想像,虛實相生,使讀者感受到江南雪野如此充滿生機活力,它不是春天,可是讓我們聞到了春的氣息,感受到了春的活力。

                              第五        揀選精當的詞語來寫。

                              “別的,在晴天之下,旋風忽來,便蓬勃地奮飛,在日光中燦燦地生光,如包藏火焰的大霧,旋轉而且升騰,彌漫太空,使太空旋轉而且升騰地閃爍,” “奮飛”“旋轉”“升騰”“閃爍”等詞語的使用,表現了朔方飛雪撼天動地的偉大力量,讓讀者聯想到那黑暗年代艱苦卓絕令人神往的戰斗!

                              第六        動靜結合來寫。

                              寫江南的雪,作者先描寫雪中的景色,然后引入蜜蜂,蝴蝶等可愛的小動物,使畫面充滿了動感。而小孩子在雪地了塑雪羅漢的場景,那就是令人欣喜的美好回憶了。

                              第七        襯托。

                              文章中江南雪滋潤美艷,朔方的雪蒼涼悲壯,可他們并不是簡單的相加。作者寫江南雪的優美,正是為了襯托朔方雪的壯美。
                              (作者:張振芳)

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