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                              廣東2013高考作文:善行,我該如何安放你

                              2013-11-15 21:44:22 來源:轉載 【 】 閱讀: 次         ★★★

                                慈善,本該是一個充滿人性關懷的字眼,是一個能讓行善者體知自身對于社會超出個體有限價值的義舉,亦當成為受助者生命的冬天里的一把溫暖的手爐,但如今,它遭遇的敏感和尷尬人盡皆知,就如那個感激卻婉拒的家庭。
                                
                                使慈善處于如此進退維谷的境遇的,在我看來,可能是行善者披著慈善外衣的功利和作秀之心,但更多的情況下,我無奈地認識到,行善者的一顆赤誠之心無可置疑,而他們行善舉的方式往往成了讓愛傳遞的最大阻礙。正因為他們總是慣于以“救世主”的目光來表達對弱勢群體的善意,受助者在這目光的省視下被點燃的一顆過于澎湃的自尊心讓善意之舉充滿了火藥味,從而,受助者拒絕犧牲在弱勢地位下愈顯珍貴的尊嚴和平等來滿足慈善家的自身價值認同。就如那最后以施舍之名拒絕捐助的家庭,我相信,生活尚且難以為繼的他們需要這份幫助,也許是以往受助的不堪經歷或這位富翁的施助方式讓他們艱難的選擇拒絕。
                                
                                然而,慈善之路不應因行善方式不當而閉塞阻滯。既已找到癥結,何不求良醫以自治?
                                
                                真正的慈善家往往堅決丟下慈善這件標簽,而以人類共同體的身份去行善,如同約翰多恩那句:“人不是一個孤島,所有人的不幸皆是我的不幸”。唯有如此,行善者才能真正懂得他想幫助的對象,才能以最適當的方式給他們以樂于接受而有意義的幫助與扶持,讓受助人覺得,他們是以平等的地位扶持著前進,而不是如難民領取ZF施舍的粥糧。
                                
                                晏陽初,世界平民教育之父,他是在發現了“苦力”的價值的基礎上向他們伸出援助之手。在平民教育運動中,與其稱他為教育界的慈善家,不如尊其為所有農民、苦力的老師、朋友。他曾說:“欲化農民,必先農民化。”他不愿安居太師矣,空談誤國計,而是扎根到農民中,探索真正對他們有用的善舉——開化與教育。
                                
                                人類作為一個共同體,要成為堅固的島嶼,需要慈善的力量來修補脆弱的堤壩,而要讓慈善有力前進,就必須行善者脫下救世主的眼鏡,帶上捐助對象的眼鏡,扎根到他的世界中,問一句:“你需要什么,我們能共同努力改善些什么?”這才是有持久力量的真正慈善,需要我們以對的方式共同前進。
                                
                                【點評】
                                本文緊扣富翁熱心慈善事業,捐助三個家庭的材料,引出有關慈善的話題,并以此為中心內容展開論述,符合本次作文的材料內容和含意范圍。
                                
                                文章開篇簡單點出慈善的意義后,順勢提出慈善遭遇婉拒的尷尬問題,進而分析產生這一問題的根本原因在于行善方式不當,緊接下文論述如何改變方式,以人類共同體的平等身份行善,并舉晏陽初的事例以佐證。最后,以共同努力改善慈善的方式為愿望收束全文,回答了文章標題提出的問題。
                                
                                文章觀點明確,真正有效的善行需要采用適合捐助對象的行善方式,在捐助者和受助者之間搭建起平等互信的橋梁,讓善意順利進行,讓愛心順利傳播。對當前慈善存在的社會問題分析較深入,認識較深刻,能夠透過現象深入本質,揭示事物內在的因果關系,思路清晰,論述較有層次。
                                
                                比較遺憾的是,文中一些長句的語言表達不太流暢,意思不太清晰,全文例證較薄弱,不夠豐富有力。
                                
                                點評人:華南師范大學文學院副教授陳一平


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