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                              廣東2013高考作文:當慈善遭遇傲骨

                              2013-11-15 22:22:33 來源:轉載 【 】 閱讀: 次         ★★★

                                隨著首富比爾?蓋茨,股神巴菲等全球富豪以“裸捐”發起富豪慈善活動,慈善之風便如無數個超級颶風,迅速席卷全球。這似乎是一種皆大歡喜的事情,捐者開心,得者開心。然而,并不是所有貧困者都會滿懷感激地接過免費的贈予。在他們心中,這或許是一種施舍,一種尊嚴的丟失,骨氣的丟失。
                                
                                那么,當慈善也遭遇“滑鐵盧”,我們應該怎么辦呢?
                                
                                首先,作為一個施善者,有這份良心固然是好的,但也要注意方式。中國富豪陳光標高調行善,在獲得無數榮譽的同時,也一直飽受詬病。原因在于他的急躁與高調。在他的每一張宣傳照中,背景都是曾接受過他援助的貧苦百姓。但是那些解決了生活困難的農民,即使是笑著的,也難掩一臉的卑微與怯弱。陳光標這種高高在上的施善方式,無疑是傷害了他們的尊嚴,活活地擠走了他們的骨氣。相反,大連市的微塵就做得比陳光標好多了。微塵不是一個人,而是一個組織,由無數匿名之人捐款而成,給需要的人送去錢財,卻不留名,不求回報。這種慈善方式不僅給受助者留下足夠的尊嚴,還很有可能感動他們,從此也加入微塵行列。由此可見,不同的慈善方式,效果其實大不相同。窮人也有尊嚴,當慈善遇上傲骨之人,最忌的便是一副高高在上的嘴。慈善的本意是幫助他人,不僅是物質上的,也有心靈上的。因此,用一種更溫和,更合適的方式去做慈善,才能最大限度地幫助他人。
                                
                                其次,作為一個受善者,要視自己的實際情況去做事,千萬不能意氣用事。古有“不食嗟來之食”的傲骨之人,最終活活餓死在街上。且不論施飯者態度如何,如果在生命危險時仍爭一時意氣,往往得不償失。接受他人資助的人,固然是要留一點骨氣,但這并不代表盲目拒絕他人好意。臺大校長黃中天功成名就后回到耶魯去感謝曾助他良多的宿管阿姨,那位美國大媽卻一臉嚴肅地拒絕了,并要求他去幫助更多的人來感謝她。黃中天謹記在心,一生中資助了無數學子。黃中天的做法,才是受善者該有的“傲骨”,不白白地接受捐助,而是把曾接受過的善意經自己的手向四周擴散,這才能使慈善走得更遠。
                                
                                當慈善遭遇“傲骨”,施善者不能一走了之,受善者也不能固執己見。只有雙方平心靜氣,改變一下方式,端正一下心態,才能使這場慈善皆大歡喜,施者開心,受者也開心。大家互相理解,你澆水,我施肥,才能使慈善之樹更加拙壯成長。
                                
                                【點評】
                                
                                此文伊始,緊扣材料,點明慈善有益世道人心,接著筆鋒一轉,提出當慈善遭遇傲骨,雙方出現如何面對之難題,文章由此焦點切入,選取施受之關系角度立論,可謂審題精準。文章先寫施善方式,以一反一正兩個例證闡釋說明何為正確的捐助方式。相較于陳光標,微塵團體的行善不是傷害而是維護了受助者的尊嚴。文章接著分析受捐心態,依然采取一反一正兩個例證進行論述,文章指出,意氣用事,盲目拒絕,并不代表所謂尊嚴、傲骨,正確方式應該像受助者黃中天那樣,用自己的善意回報社會。文章著意發掘此例證蘊含的施受雙方傳播善意的慈善本質,由此可見,文章立意深刻。此文結尾,以澆水施肥喻示施受雙方的本真關系,進一步強化文章的中心論點。縱觀全文,觀點辯證,結構嚴謹,論證方法得當。但此文亦存在一些瑕疵,如“擠走骨氣”的表述不準確,傲骨與回報之間的邏輯關聯略顯牽強,還出現一個錯別字“拙”,盡管如此仍不失為一篇較好的考場作文。
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